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Monday, May 18, 2015
Rewrites begin!
The
rewrites begin in earnest! The new book is tentatively called Seeing Byzantium
and just for giggles here's the first paragraph of chapter 2:
Grekov's store, Ivan's Trading Post, was closed on Saturdays. He called it 'Ivan's' even though Grekov's first name was actually Trofim. "Nobody knows Trofim," he'd say, "they expect a Russian to be Ivan or Anatoly or Dmitry. Don't confuse customers - give them what they expect and they'll be comfortable. People who are comfortable are more likely to spend money. Besides," he'd tap his chest with both hands, "my middle name is Ivan." Of course, depending on who he was talking to, Grekov's middle name was also Arkady, Vladimir, or Mikhail. He wore middle names like new shirts, trying them on for comfort.
Grekov's store, Ivan's Trading Post, was closed on Saturdays. He called it 'Ivan's' even though Grekov's first name was actually Trofim. "Nobody knows Trofim," he'd say, "they expect a Russian to be Ivan or Anatoly or Dmitry. Don't confuse customers - give them what they expect and they'll be comfortable. People who are comfortable are more likely to spend money. Besides," he'd tap his chest with both hands, "my middle name is Ivan." Of course, depending on who he was talking to, Grekov's middle name was also Arkady, Vladimir, or Mikhail. He wore middle names like new shirts, trying them on for comfort.
Monday, May 5, 2014
First Chapter From the New Book
Work is progressing on the new book, tentatively titled In Darkness. It's a full-on horror story this time around. It's going slower than I'd like, but that's always the case with writing for me. Anyway, I thought I'd share the very first scene in its first-draft state. Hope you enjoy.
Spring 1981
It had been three days since the boys had disappeared,
vanished off the river like morning mist, and Maggie Gray was giving up. She
stood on the sand at the town rec area wearing her husband’s old red and black
hunting coat, her arms wrapped so tightly around herself that it might as well
have been a straitjacket. She wondered why people said ‘giving up’ like it was
easy, like it was a relief. As if it was a relaxing of effort instead of the
lifting up of a burden.
The sun had already gone down behind the ridge on the other
side of the river, and everything was turning to shades of gray. The water was
smooth, black in the low light. Volunteers were shadows, hauling canoes out of
the water, making sounds on the sand like snakes through dry grass.
“We’ll try again in the morning, Maggie. Don’t lose hope.”
Hands reached out to touch her, looking to comfort and be comforted. She stood
straight, still, eyes on the water. People waited in uncomfortable silence and then
moved on.
Hope. She almost spit. Hope was an ice cube, held in warm
hands. Hope hurt to grasp and dwindled the longer you tried to keep it. She’d
had enough of hope. She was ready to let it go.
The boys were dead. Both her boys. This thought had appeared
the first night, when they’d found the canoe. The little, battered Old Town the
boys had gotten for Christmas. It had been found miles downstream, at the
Little Salmon dam. Cooler and paddles still in it. The cooler had been full of
fiddleheads. That was when she’d first had the thought that maybe the boys
weren’t just lost. Maybe something bad had happened. The idea had been nothing
more than a little sprout then, but now its roots had spread all through her
mind and she found it difficult to think anything else past its insistent
repetition.
Dead. Both of them. Her boys. Dead.
There was another world on the other side of that thought.
She had the idea that once it had worked its way through her entire mind, once
it had become real, that the world
would somehow tilt even further on its axis. That the sun would fade, grow cold
and distant. That the air itself would smell and taste different, like ashes
maybe, or camphor. That somehow everything would grow dim.
She hadn’t gotten there yet, hadn’t crossed that Rubicon.
She was tired, though. So tired. Of holding
herself upright and strong. Standing on the shore of the river every day like
she was a beacon, like she could call them out of wherever they were by her
presence alone. Standing until her spine felt like a red hot wire and the
cramps ran up and down her legs like wolf spiders on old lumber. She was tired
of hoping.
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